Chestertown
A basswood tree
one of the oldest around
is dropping its yellow leaves
they are dropping off
inside a warm fog, billowing in from off the bay.
Clouds of vapor are white
in the street light
and the salt water smell
has come up river covering
causeways and corn stubble
a sweet land mown.
Stone steps, stone streets
the tallest magnolia for miles in the square
I am taking off my jacket in the night
and looking for a dry place to sit.
Francis Ponge could tell you
about the yellow leaves above me
landing on a damp street
and speaking of a tree
a tree who is speaking in leaves
and become a mute
with the fog in her mouth.
Across the bay
far away for a child to walk
I could be sleeping tonight
waiting on a recurrent dream
I will swear begins here
under the magnolia
under the basswood leaves
falling
a pact of shared muteness.
March comes in everywhere light
felt before seen
heard before felt
down a street where I keep walking.
Everywhere light
but no snow-
the maple buds booming red
and branching choruses talking over
the young children who can walk and tumble
and mothers who must push or carry the rest
bellowing in a heard light over them all.
I think this dream
of snowless winter
starts here
in this warm fog and wet streets
dock smells and gulls motionless in half light
on sepia water.
I swear I have been here before
a first place
pushed by my mother and beginning to walk
across emerald patches of new grass
never having felt the softness and bird chattering lights
before
starting over and over again
every time I close my eyes.
Seeing street lamps mutter and trees opening out
and spun bright leaf dotting pictures
in a new, gentle sun
remembering nothing before that.
Yes, I am pretty sure
it started here once
which is why I read Ponge and his tale
of leaf dropping trees and trees speaking through leaves
leaf language
because I am leaving those days
like I fear
we are leaving winter
two strangers
separated
by a dream.
-Jeremy Nathan Marks
-Chestertown is a small town (and a real place) on the Eastern Shore of Maryland, sitting on the Chester River. It is a lovely spot with much character and beautiful old architecture. I often think of it as a place of possibilities and also as a spot across a bridge I can only sometimes gain passage.












Reblogged this on Susan Daniels Poetry and commented:
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Two days in a row I must reblog Jeremy.
Thank you, Susan! A true honor. Really!
Jeremy–I had to. Simply stunning, and so, so deep.
I’m so glad you like it and that it works. I am always happy when something that gets dredged up from the deep works.
Forgive me for slipping into some other guise as a reader only, but though I have not gone back to read some of your past work-I will-I have a tremendous sense about the poetry you strive for and have the ability to reach. This poem has much in it that is very good and strives for beauty. For me though I think you sell yourself short in putting something out there that is unpolished or better, not as tight as it could be to make it be what it wants to. I don’t know how many rewrites you may go through or how much you may angst about where to put a comma. I can only speak for myself and my process. I liker this poem enough to chance on saying these things to you. From here on in I will not mention it again. Good luck, KB
I appreciate your honesty very much and am not afraid to hear criticism. I look at poetry as never being finished but that does not mean that I don’t believe that reqrites aren’t necessary -I certainly do.
If you don’t mind, what do you think needs polishing? I am very interested to know.
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Thank you. I appreciate the share.
Very lovely, soothing. A place that gives comfort, whether real or in the mind, is something we all search for…well done. Leo
Thank you, Leo.
I love the idea of trees speaking through leaves! This poem makes me want to be there and see it face to face. Lovely!
Thank you. I should say that the idea of trees speaking through leaves is something I owe to Francis Ponge. It is a mark of his genius.
ahhh I feel like I am there
beautiful beautiful writing
as usual
you are a gifted poet
This is poetry – it simply carries you along! Great stuff – these lines strike particularly deep
felt before seen
heard before felt
Thank you, Noel.
wow, why am I feeling dizzy after reading this? I feel like I have been rotated over and over while standing at the same spot. I always search for these unending cycles in all of my work and you have captured it so beautifully here!